Poetry Week: Midday Two – Chaplain Mike

8 thoughts on “Poetry Week: Midday Two – Chaplain Mike”

1. “Did not our hearts burn within us?”

   I encounter the risen Christ every day.
   May he be with us all.

   Christ is risen

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2. The road they met the risen Jesus on led them back to the city he died in.

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3. Maybe sung, if set to music and expanded. These two stanzas could serve as alternative refrains.

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4. The language of the Bible itself, especially the New Testament, is minimalist in spirit, if not stylistically.

   It works.

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5. Lovely! It has a meditative feel to it, the sort of thing that could be recited and contemplated.

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6. Very minimalist, but works.

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7. I like how your poem’s form fits your message.

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8. Love it!

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